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Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 1 — Band 7 model essay

258 words · 13 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Noise pollution is a serious problem in many cities. What causes it, and what can be done to reduce it?

噪音污染是许多城市的严重问题。原因是什么?如何减少?

Band 7 model answer

Noise pollution has emerged as a serious problem in many of the world's cities, affecting the health and comfort of millions. This essay will examine the principal causes of urban noise before proposing several ways of reducing it.

The sources of noise pollution are numerous. The foremost is traffic: the sheer volume of cars, motorcycles, buses and lorries on city roads generates a constant din of engines and horns throughout the day and often well into the night. Construction is another major contributor, for rapidly growing cities are perpetually building, and the heavy machinery involved is extremely loud. Factories, airports and the amplified music of bars and clubs add further layers of noise, combining to make the urban environment stressful and, for many, genuinely harmful.

A range of solutions, however, is available. Governments could establish designated quiet zones around hospitals, schools and residential areas, where horns and noisy machinery are prohibited. Investing in efficient public transport would reduce the number of private vehicles and hence the traffic noise they produce. Planting trees and erecting sound barriers along busy roads can also absorb or deflect noise, while strict regulations limiting the sound emitted by factories and entertainment venues would help considerably. Raising public awareness of the health effects of noise could also encourage more considerate behaviour.

In conclusion, urban noise pollution is caused chiefly by traffic, construction and industry. Through a combination of quiet zones, improved public transport, green barriers and firm regulation, however, cities could meaningfully reduce this problem and become calmer, healthier places in which to live.

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