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Cambridge IELTS 18 Test 3 — Band 8 model essay

262 words · 13 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think online learning is a good replacement for traditional classrooms. Others think it should only be a supplement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为在线学习可以替代传统课堂;另一些人认为它只能作为补充。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 8 model answer

Online learning has expanded dramatically in recent years, its rise accelerated by the pandemic. Some now regard it as a viable replacement for the traditional classroom, while others insist it should remain merely a supplement. This essay will consider both positions before advancing my own view.

The merits of online learning are considerable. Its convenience is obvious, sparing students the time and cost of commuting and enabling them to study wherever they happen to be. Recorded material can be revisited as often as comprehension requires, and learners can advance at a pace suited to their own needs. Online provision also tends to be cheaper and, most valuably, extends access to first-rate teaching to students in remote regions or straitened circumstances who would otherwise be excluded. In these ways it democratises education to a remarkable degree.

The counter-arguments, however, carry real force. A physical classroom permits immediate dialogue between student and teacher and nurtures the friendships, collaboration and social competence that emerge only through face-to-face contact. Furthermore, reliable internet and a quiet study space are far from universal, and the solitary, unsupervised nature of online study makes sustained concentration difficult for many learners, particularly the young.

In my opinion, online learning is an immensely useful instrument, yet it is most effective as a complement to, rather than a wholesale replacement for, conventional teaching. The richest education, I would argue, marries the flexibility and reach of online lessons with the human immediacy of the classroom, and it is this blended approach, rather than either mode in isolation, that best serves the needs of students.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 18 Test 3 model answer is 262 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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