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Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 3 — Band 8 model essay

260 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有人认为政府应把钱花在铁路而不是公路上。你在多大程度上同意或反对?

Band 8 model answer

How best to divide a finite transport budget is a perennial dilemma, and some maintain that governments ought to prioritise railways over roads. Although I share the conviction that rail deserves greater investment, I cannot agree that roads should be allowed to fall by the wayside.

The argument for rail is genuinely persuasive. Trains transport large numbers of passengers and substantial quantities of freight with an efficiency that private vehicles cannot match, thereby relieving the congestion that paralyses many road networks. They are, moreover, markedly greener, and expanding rail capacity is one of the more realistic ways of curbing the emissions that drive climate change. In crowded metropolitan areas especially, a dependable rail system rescues commuters from hours squandered in traffic, with tangible benefits for both productivity and quality of life.

Yet to conclude from this that roads may be neglected would be shortsighted. Vast rural populations lie beyond the reach of any railway and rely entirely on roads for mobility and supply. Ambulances, buses and delivery vehicles traverse the road network daily, and permitting it to deteriorate would compromise safety and sever the very communities that public infrastructure exists to serve.

In conclusion, I agree that railways warrant considerable and perhaps increased investment, particularly within and between major cities, where their efficiency and environmental advantages are greatest. To pursue this at the cost of the road network, however, would be a false economy. The wiser course is not to favour one mode absolutely but to fund both intelligently, directing resources to wherever each can deliver the greatest public benefit.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 3 model answer is 260 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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