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Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 2 — Band 8 model essay

261 words · 11 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen, and what can be done to encourage a positive attitude?

许多年轻人离校时对学习持消极态度。原因是什么?如何鼓励积极态度?

Band 8 model answer

That so many young people emerge from their schooling with a jaded, even hostile, attitude towards learning is a genuine cause for concern, since a lasting appetite for knowledge matters far beyond the classroom. This essay will examine the roots of this problem and propose ways of cultivating a more positive disposition.

The causes are several and mutually reinforcing. Foremost among them is the relentless emphasis on examinations that characterises many systems, which reduces education to the anxious pursuit of marks and drains it of curiosity and pleasure. Compounding this is uninspired pedagogy: lessons in which a teacher merely dictates while pupils passively transcribe are not only tedious but obscure the relevance of the subject to students' lives. A third factor, more corrosive still, is the erosion of confidence, for young people who meet with repeated failure gradually come to equate school itself with humiliation and defeat.

These difficulties, however, are far from intractable. Teachers can transform engagement by replacing passive instruction with discussion, collaborative projects and hands-on tasks that demand active participation, while explicitly connecting academic content to the world beyond the school gates so that its purpose becomes evident. Crucially, both teachers and parents should praise effort and improvement rather than fixating on results, thereby rebuilding the self-belief on which motivation depends.

In conclusion, disaffection with learning arises chiefly from examination pressure, lifeless teaching and shattered confidence. Yet through more imaginative instruction, a firmer link to everyday relevance and sustained encouragement, schools could restore the intrinsic love of learning that formal education, at its best, is meant to awaken.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 2 model answer is 261 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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