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Cambridge IELTS 11 · Test 3 · Band 8

Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 3 — Band 8 model essay

258 words · 11 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

企业除了赚钱之外也有社会责任。你在多大程度上同意或反对?

Band 8 model answer

The proposition that businesses owe society responsibilities extending beyond the mere generation of profit is one I endorse without hesitation, for companies are not isolated money-making machines but integral participants in the communities that sustain them.

The reasoning behind this conviction is straightforward. Businesses depend upon society at every turn, drawing on its workforce, its infrastructure and its natural resources in order to function. Having taken so much, it is only equitable that they reciprocate by safeguarding the environment they exploit and treating their employees with fairness and dignity. Beyond mere obligation, moreover, large corporations wield resources and influence that governments sometimes lack, positioning them to alleviate social ills, from underfunded education to entrenched poverty, and to lead the way in curbing pollution. Contributions of this kind demonstrably enhance collective wellbeing, and they may also inspire smaller firms to follow suit, multiplying the benefit across an entire industry.

Critics, it is true, insist that a firm's only duty is to maximise returns and settle its taxes, contending that expenditure on social causes erodes profit and blunts competitiveness. Such an argument, however, betrays a curiously myopic understanding of commerce.

In practice, responsible conduct and commercial success are seldom at odds. An ever more discerning public gravitates towards enterprises it perceives as ethical, so that a genuine commitment to social and environmental values frequently rewards a company with loyalty, reputation and durable profitability. I therefore agree emphatically that businesses carry real social responsibilities alongside their financial aims, and that discharging them serves the long-term interests of society and shareholders alike.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 3 model answer is 258 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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