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Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 3 — Band 6 model essay

256 words · 15 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

The increase in the production of consumer goods damages the natural environment. What are the causes, and what can be done?

消费品生产增加损害自然环境。原因是什么?可以采取什么措施?

Band 6 model answer

In the modern world, factories produce more and more consumer goods every year, such as clothes, phones and electronic devices. Many people think that this increase damages the natural environment. In this essay I will explain the causes of this problem and suggest what can be done.

There are several causes of this environmental damage. Firstly, to produce so many goods, factories use a huge amount of energy and natural resources, and this creates a lot of pollution and greenhouse gases. Secondly, many products are made cheaply and they do not last a long time, so people throw them away quickly and buy new ones. This creates a mountain of waste, especially plastic and electronic waste, which is very difficult to recycle. In addition, advertisements make people want to buy things that they do not really need.

Fortunately, there are some solutions to this problem. Companies should produce goods that are stronger and last longer, so people do not need to replace them so often. Governments can also make strict rules to control the pollution from factories and to encourage recycling. Furthermore, people themselves should change their habits and buy only what they really need. If everyone buys a little less, together this can make a big difference for the environment.

In conclusion, the increase in the production of consumer goods damages the environment because of pollution, waste and too much shopping. However, with better products, strong laws and more careful consumers, I believe we can reduce this damage and protect the planet for the future.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 3 model answer is 256 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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