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Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 3 — Band 8 model essay

258 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

The increase in the production of consumer goods damages the natural environment. What are the causes, and what can be done?

消费品生产增加损害自然环境。原因是什么?可以采取什么措施?

Band 8 model answer

With each passing year the world's factories disgorge ever larger volumes of consumer goods, from fast fashion to the latest electronic gadgets, and it is widely held that this escalating output is inflicting serious damage on the natural environment. This essay will trace the causes of that damage before proposing a set of remedies.

The problem arises from several interlocking sources. Manufacturing on so colossal a scale devours energy and raw materials, releasing pollution and greenhouse gases at every stage. Aggravating this is the modern doctrine of disposability: countless products are now made cheaply and engineered to fail, so that consumers discard and replace them incessantly, generating vast quantities of waste, much of it plastic or electronic and stubbornly resistant to recycling. Underpinning the whole cycle is a pervasive advertising culture that manufactures desire, coaxing people into buying far more than they could ever need.

A number of solutions, encouragingly, present themselves. Governments could compel manufacturers to build durability and repairability into their products, dramatically slowing the churn of replacement, while imposing stringent controls on industrial emissions and robust incentives for recycling. Consumers, meanwhile, bear their own share of responsibility, and a cultural shift towards buying less but better would ease the pressure considerably.

In conclusion, the environmental toll of rising consumer production flows chiefly from energy-intensive manufacturing, a throwaway mentality and relentless overconsumption. Yet none of these is beyond correction. Through more durable design, resolute regulation and more mindful consumption, humanity could substantially curb the damage and reconcile its material appetites with the health of the planet.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 3 model answer is 258 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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