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Cambridge IELTS 15 Test 4 — Band 6 model essay

252 words · 16 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think modernisation causes traditional cultures to disappear. Others think this is a natural process. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为现代化会导致传统文化消失;另一些人认为这是自然过程。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 6 model answer

In the modern world, many traditional cultures are changing or disappearing. Some people think that modernisation is the cause of this problem, while others believe that it is just a natural process. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On one hand, some people believe that modernisation destroys traditional culture. Because of globalisation and technology, young people now watch the same films, listen to the same music and eat the same food from other countries. As a result, they slowly forget their own traditions, language and customs. In many places, old festivals and handicrafts are disappearing because young people are not interested in them anymore. So modernisation can be a real danger for local cultures.

On the other hand, other people think that this change is natural. Culture has always changed through history, because societies never stay the same. When people meet other cultures, they take some new ideas and give up some old ones, and this is a normal part of human life. From this point of view, we should not be too worried, because culture is always developing.

In my opinion, both views have some truth. Modernisation does put traditional cultures in danger, but change itself is natural. I think the best solution is that we accept new things but also try to protect the most important parts of our culture, for example through education and museums. In conclusion, culture will always change, but we should make an effort to keep our valuable traditions alive.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 15 Test 4 model answer is 252 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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