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Cambridge IELTS 15 Test 4 — Band 7 model essay

252 words · 14 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think modernisation causes traditional cultures to disappear. Others think this is a natural process. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为现代化会导致传统文化消失;另一些人认为这是自然过程。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 7 model answer

As the world modernises, many traditional cultures are being transformed or lost entirely. Some attribute this to modernisation itself, while others regard it as a natural and inevitable process. This essay will consider both perspectives before offering my own view.

There is considerable force in the argument that modernisation erodes traditional culture. Globalisation and technology have created a world in which young people everywhere watch the same films, listen to the same music and consume the same food, and in doing so gradually lose touch with their own languages, customs and beliefs. In many communities, ancient festivals and traditional crafts are fading because the young no longer take an interest in them. Seen this way, modernisation poses a genuine threat to cultural diversity.

On the other hand, many contend that such change is entirely natural. Cultures have never been static; throughout history they have evolved as societies encountered one another, adopting new ideas while discarding older ones. From this standpoint, the current transformation is merely the latest chapter in a continuous process, and there is little cause for alarm.

In my opinion, both arguments contain truth. Modernisation undeniably endangers traditional cultures, yet change in itself is a normal feature of human history. The wisest response, I believe, is to embrace beneficial innovations while making a deliberate effort to preserve the most valuable elements of our heritage, through education, museums and cultural programmes. Overall, culture will always change, but that is no reason to allow our most precious traditions to vanish through neglect.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 15 Test 4 model answer is 252 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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