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Cambridge IELTS 17 Test 2 — Band 8 model essay

269 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people believe governments should censor harmful online content. Others think that this threatens freedom of speech. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为政府应审查有害网络内容;另一些人认为这会威胁言论自由。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 8 model answer

The internet has placed an ocean of information at our fingertips, but a portion of it is undeniably harmful. This has prompted some to advocate government censorship of dangerous online content, while others fear that such intervention imperils freedom of speech. This essay will weigh both positions before advancing my own view.

There is a genuine case for a measure of censorship. The internet plays host to a great deal of pernicious material, from graphic violence and deliberate misinformation to content that actively encourages self-harm or the harming of others, and such material is particularly perilous for children, who may encounter it almost by accident. By excising the most dangerous of this content, governments could shield the vulnerable and stem the circulation of genuinely harmful ideas, which is why many regard some regulation as a legitimate duty of the state.

Yet the opposing concern is equally weighty. Freedom of expression is a foundational liberty, and citizens are entitled to voice their views and exchange information even when the authorities find them uncongenial. Should a government tighten its grip on the internet too far, it may also bury inconvenient truths and muzzle criticism of the powerful, a slide towards repression that history warns against.

In my opinion, a degree of censorship is defensible, but only within rigorously defined limits. The state may justifiably remove content that is demonstrably dangerous, incitements to violence or material that abuses children, while scrupulously refraining from policing ordinary opinion, debate and journalism. Ultimately, safeguarding citizens and safeguarding free expression are both indispensable, and the challenge lies in holding the two in careful and honest balance.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 17 Test 2 model answer is 269 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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