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Cambridge IELTS 19 · Test 4 · Band 6

Cambridge IELTS 19 Test 4 — Band 6 model essay

270 words · 14 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think sport is a waste of public money, while others believe it has important benefits for society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为体育是公共资金的浪费;另一些人认为它对社会有重要益处。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 6 model answer

Some people believe that spending public money on sport is a waste, while other people think that sport brings important benefits to the society. In this essay I will discuss both opinions and give my view.

On one hand, I understand why some people think sport is a waste of money. Governments have limited budget, and there are many serious problems such as health care, education and poverty. If a country spend a lot of money to build big stadiums or to organise expensive events, maybe this money is not used for more important things. Sometimes a stadium is used only for a short time, and after that it becomes empty, so it is not a good use of money.

On the other hand, sport also has many good benefits. When the government supports sport, more people can do exercise, and this make them healthier and reduce the cost of hospitals in the future. Sport is also good for the children because it teach them teamwork and discipline. In addition, big sport events like the Olympics can bring people together and make the country famous around the world. These events also give young people famous athletes that they can look up to.

In my opinion, sport is not a waste of money if it is spent in the right way. I think the government should spend the money on local sport facilities that normal people can use every day, instead of very expensive events. In conclusion, sport has both advantages and disadvantages, but with careful planning it gives real benefits to the society and to the health of the people.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 19 Test 4 model answer is 270 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

What makes this a Band 6 IELTS essay?

A Band 6 answer addresses the task with a clear position and adequate vocabulary, but development is uneven and it contains noticeable grammar errors that do not prevent understanding.

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