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Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 2 — Band 8 model essay

252 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some experts believe it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

一些专家认为,孩子在小学而不是中学开始学习外语更好。这种做法的优点是否大于缺点?

Band 8 model answer

There is increasing support among educationalists for introducing foreign languages at primary rather than secondary school. Having weighed the competing considerations, I am firmly of the view that the advantages of an early start decisively outweigh its drawbacks.

The linguistic rationale is powerful. Young children possess a neurological plasticity that fades with age, enabling them to reproduce unfamiliar sounds with a precision that older learners rarely attain, and consequently to achieve a far more authentic accent. Because they acquire language intuitively rather than analytically, the experience resembles the effortless absorption of their mother tongue. An early beginning also extends the total span of exposure, so that years of accumulated practice allow pupils to reach genuine fluency by the end of their schooling, while incidental contact with another culture nurtures the tolerance and curiosity that a globalised world demands.

The objections, though not baseless, are comparatively minor. Some fear that a second language may momentarily unsettle children still mastering their first, and it is true that primary schools do not always employ specialist teachers or possess room in a crowded curriculum. Such concerns, however, describe problems of implementation rather than of principle.

Precisely because these obstacles are practical, they are also remediable, through investment in properly trained teachers and imaginative, play-based instruction that eases rather than burdens young learners. Set against the enduring benefits of near-native pronunciation, superior fluency and cultural openness, the transient difficulties appear slight. I therefore have little hesitation in concluding that the case for early language learning is compelling.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 2 model answer is 252 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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