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Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 1 — Band 7 model essay

254 words · 13 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do the advantages of charging people outweigh the disadvantages?

许多博物馆收费,也有一些免费。收费的优点是否大于缺点?

Band 7 model answer

Museums play a valuable role in preserving culture and educating the public, yet countries differ over whether entry should be free or paid. While charging admission brings certain benefits, I believe its disadvantages ultimately outweigh them.

There are, admittedly, sound reasons for charging. The revenue collected helps to maintain the building, conserve fragile and often priceless exhibits, and fund new displays that keep a museum relevant. Institutions that rely solely on shrinking government grants may struggle to survive, so an entry fee can provide a stable and independent source of income. In this sense, charging visitors can protect the very collections that make a museum worth visiting.

Nevertheless, the drawbacks are significant. The most serious is that admission fees deter many potential visitors, particularly students, children and low-income families, for whom the cost may be prohibitive. Since one of the central purposes of a museum is to make knowledge and heritage accessible to everyone, pricing out large sections of society undermines its educational mission. When entry is free, by contrast, visitor numbers rise sharply, and more people benefit from contact with art, history and science, which enriches the community as a whole.

In my opinion, therefore, the case against charging is the stronger one. Although fees ease financial pressures, they do so at the cost of accessibility and equality of opportunity. I would argue that governments should fund museums through public money wherever possible, so that these important institutions remain open to all rather than becoming a privilege of those who can afford them.

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