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Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 1 — Band 8 model essay

264 words · 13 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do the advantages of charging people outweigh the disadvantages?

许多博物馆收费,也有一些免费。收费的优点是否大于缺点?

Band 8 model answer

Whether museums should levy an entrance fee or open their doors free of charge is a question on which national practice varies considerably. Although charging admission is not without merit, I am persuaded that its disadvantages outweigh its benefits.

The argument for charging rests largely on financial necessity. Maintaining historic buildings and conserving delicate, irreplaceable artefacts is enormously expensive, and admission income can fund this work as well as the temporary exhibitions that keep collections fresh and engaging. For institutions whose public subsidies are diminishing, a reliable stream of revenue from visitors may be the difference between flourishing and closing altogether. Seen this way, a modest fee helps to safeguard the very treasures the public comes to see.

The objections, however, strike at the museum's essential purpose. Charging inevitably deters those with the least disposable income, most notably students, children and struggling families, precisely the groups who stand to gain most from exposure to culture and learning. A museum exists, after all, to democratise knowledge, and a price barrier quietly transforms a public good into a discretionary luxury. Where entry is free, attendance rises markedly, and the resulting contact with art, science and history yields social benefits that no ticket revenue can measure.

On balance, therefore, I regard free access as the wiser policy. While admission charges relieve immediate financial strain, they erode the inclusiveness that gives museums their civic value. Governments would do better to fund these institutions through taxation, ensuring that the cultural and educational riches they hold remain the shared inheritance of everyone, not the preserve of those able to pay.

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