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Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 4 — Band 8 model essay

258 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think homesickness is a positive thing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有人认为思乡是一种积极的情感。你在多大程度上同意或反对?

Band 8 model answer

It is common for those who leave home to study or work abroad to be gripped by homesickness, and some contend that this longing is, on balance, a positive experience. I agree only in part, for homesickness carries genuine benefits and genuine dangers in roughly equal measure.

There is much to be said in its favour. To pine for one's family and familiar surroundings is, after all, evidence of deep and loving attachments, which are themselves a source of richness in life. Distance also sharpens appreciation, since we frequently grasp the true worth of home only once we have left it behind. Most valuably of all, wrestling with the discomfort of separation cultivates resilience and self-reliance, obliging young people to confront and resolve their difficulties independently rather than leaning on the support they once took for granted.

Yet the darker side of homesickness cannot be dismissed. When the feeling swells beyond a certain point, it can shade into persistent loneliness and even depression. Students are especially vulnerable, for a mind perpetually turned towards home struggles to engage with study, and some, overwhelmed, surrender promising opportunities and return prematurely.

My considered view, therefore, is that homesickness is a natural emotion whose value depends entirely on its intensity. In moderation it teaches us to cherish our families and to stand on our own feet; unchecked, it corrodes concentration and wellbeing. I thus agree that homesickness can be a positive thing, but only for those who learn to master it, harnessing its lessons while refusing to let it govern their lives.

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