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Cambridge IELTS 17 · Test 1 · Band 6

Cambridge IELTS 17 Test 1 — Band 6 model essay

261 words · 15 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think the best way to improve education is to increase teachers' salaries. Others think there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为改善教育的最佳方式是提高教师工资;另一些人认为还有更好的方法。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 6 model answer

Everybody agrees that education is very important, but people do not agree about how to improve it. Some people think the best way is to increase teachers' salaries, while others believe there are better ways. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On one hand, there are good reasons to pay teachers more. Teaching is a very difficult and important job, but in many countries the salary is quite low. Because of this, some talented people choose other careers with more money, so the schools cannot find enough good teachers. If the salaries are higher, more clever people will become teachers, and the teachers who are already working will feel more motivated and happy. This can improve the quality of education.

On the other hand, some people think there are better ways to improve education. For example, the government can reduce the number of students in each class, build better schools, and buy more books, computers and equipment. Better training for teachers is also very important, because good teaching methods can help students more than only money. Some people say that money alone does not make a teacher better if the school system has other problems. A good school also needs a clear plan and good leaders, not only high salaries.

In my opinion, increasing teachers' salaries is important, but it should not be the only solution. In conclusion, I believe that good salaries, smaller classes and better training should all be used together, because education is a complex problem that needs more than one answer.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 17 Test 1 model answer is 261 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 6 answer addresses the task with a clear position and adequate vocabulary, but development is uneven and it contains noticeable grammar errors that do not prevent understanding.

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