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Cambridge IELTS 17 Test 1 — Band 7 model essay

258 words · 13 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think the best way to improve education is to increase teachers' salaries. Others think there are better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为改善教育的最佳方式是提高教师工资;另一些人认为还有更好的方法。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 7 model answer

There is universal agreement that education matters, but far less consensus about how best to improve it. Some argue that the key is to raise teachers' salaries, while others believe more effective methods exist. This essay will consider both views before giving my own opinion.

There is a compelling case for paying teachers more. Teaching is a demanding and vital profession, yet in many countries it is poorly rewarded, and as a result talented graduates are lured into better-paid careers, leaving schools short of able staff. Higher salaries would attract more capable people into the profession and would raise the morale and motivation of those already teaching, both of which could improve the quality of education children receive.

On the other hand, some maintain that money alone is not the answer. Reducing class sizes, constructing better school buildings and supplying more books, computers and equipment could all enhance learning substantially. Improved teacher training is perhaps especially important, since sound teaching methods can benefit students even more than higher pay. Critics point out that simply paying teachers more will achieve little if the wider education system remains flawed. A well-designed curriculum and capable school leadership are equally important for real and lasting improvement in the classroom.

In my opinion, raising teachers' salaries is genuinely important, but it should not be regarded as the sole remedy. Overall, I believe that better pay, smaller classes and stronger training must be pursued together, because improving education is a complex challenge that cannot be solved by any single measure acting on its own.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 17 Test 1 model answer is 258 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 7 answer presents a clear, well-developed position with a good range of vocabulary and complex sentences, and only occasional errors.

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