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Cambridge IELTS 18 · Test 1 · Band 6

Cambridge IELTS 18 Test 1 — Band 6 model essay

257 words · 15 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

In many countries, the population is aging. What problems does this cause, and what are some possible solutions?

许多国家正在老龄化。这会带来哪些问题?有哪些解决办法?

Band 6 model answer

In many countries around the world, the population is getting older, because people live longer and families have fewer children. This ageing population creates several problems. In this essay I will explain these problems and suggest some possible solutions.

There are several problems caused by an ageing population. Firstly, when there are many old people and fewer young workers, it becomes difficult to pay for the pensions and the health care of the elderly. The government must spend a lot of money, but there are not enough workers paying taxes. Secondly, old people often need more medical care, so the hospitals become very busy and crowded. In addition, some elderly people live alone and feel lonely, because their children are busy or live far away. This can be bad for their mental health, and they may need more help from the government or from other people.

Fortunately, there are some solutions to these problems. Firstly, the government can encourage people to have more children, for example by giving money or better support to families. Secondly, countries can allow more young immigrants to come and work, so there are enough workers to support the economy. Furthermore, the government can build more care homes and health services for the elderly, and companies can allow old people to continue working if they want.

In conclusion, an ageing population causes problems such as high costs, pressure on hospitals and loneliness. However, with support for families, more workers and better services for the elderly, I believe these problems can be managed successfully.

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