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Cambridge IELTS 18 · Test 2 · Band 6

Cambridge IELTS 18 Test 2 — Band 6 model essay

261 words · 15 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Tourism is often promoted as a way to improve local economies. However, it can also cause problems for local residents. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

旅游业常被视为改善地方经济的方式,但也会给当地居民带来问题。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 6 model answer

Tourism is a big industry in many countries. Some people say that tourism is a good way to improve the local economy, while others believe it causes problems for the local residents. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On one hand, tourism brings many economic benefits. When tourists visit a place, they spend money on hotels, restaurants, transport and shopping, and this money helps the local businesses to grow. Tourism also creates many jobs for local people, for example as guides, drivers, cooks and hotel workers. In poor areas, this income can be very important and can improve the life of many families. So tourism can make a region richer, and because of this many governments try hard to attract more tourists.

On the other hand, tourism also creates problems for the local residents. When too many tourists come, the places become very crowded and noisy, and there is more traffic and pollution. The prices of houses and food can also become higher because of the tourists, so life becomes more expensive for the local people. In addition, sometimes tourists do not respect the local culture, and the traditional way of life can change or disappear.

In my opinion, tourism is generally positive because of the money and the jobs it brings, but the problems are real and must be controlled. The government should limit the number of tourists in popular places and protect the environment and the culture. In conclusion, tourism can help the local economy if it is managed in a responsible way.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 18 Test 2 model answer is 261 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 6 answer addresses the task with a clear position and adequate vocabulary, but development is uneven and it contains noticeable grammar errors that do not prevent understanding.

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