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Cambridge IELTS 19 Test 3 — Band 8 model essay

262 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think governments should tax unhealthy food to improve public health. Others think people should decide what to eat by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为政府应对不健康食品征税以改善公众健康;另一些人认为人们应自行决定饮食。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 8 model answer

As diet-related conditions place a growing burden on health systems, some commentators advocate taxing unhealthy food to steer the public towards better choices, whereas others insist that what people eat is a matter of personal liberty. Having considered both positions, I believe a carefully targeted tax is defensible, provided it forms part of a wider approach.

The case for taxation rests on the well-documented influence of price on behaviour. When calorie-dense products become dearer, consumption typically falls, and the revenue generated can be directed towards healthcare or preventive campaigns. The levies on sugary drinks adopted in a number of countries appear to have curbed sales, lending empirical weight to the argument that fiscal measures can shift habits in a way that exhortation alone cannot.

Those who object, however, advance principled and practical concerns. They contend that competent adults are entitled to govern their own diets without state interference, and that such taxes are inherently regressive, penalising poorer households far more sharply than affluent ones for whom the added cost is trivial. Many also argue that education fosters lasting change more effectively than financial coercion.

My own view is that these objections temper rather than defeat the case for taxation. Governments are justified in discouraging the most demonstrably harmful products, yet a tax imposed in isolation risks being both unfair and resented. Coupled with transparent labelling, subsidised healthier alternatives and sustained public education, however, it becomes one instrument within a coherent strategy. Ultimately, safeguarding public health need not mean overriding personal choice, but rather reshaping the environment in which those choices are made.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 19 Test 3 model answer is 262 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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