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Cambridge IELTS 20 Test 3 — Band 6 model essay

261 words · 16 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Many people accept online tracking in exchange for convenience. Others think privacy is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

许多人为了便利接受线上追踪;另一些人认为隐私更重要。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 6 model answer

Today, many websites and apps collect our personal data when we use them. Some people accept this online tracking because it gives them convenience, but other people think that privacy is more important. In this essay I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

On one hand, there are reasons why people accept tracking. When a website knows what we like, it can show us useful products and recommendation. For example, a shopping app can suggest things that we really want to buy, and a map app can give faster directions. This make our life more easy and save our time. Many people think that if the service is free and useful, it is okay to share some information.

On the other hand, some people worry about their privacy. They do not like that the companies know so much about their life, such as where they go and what they buy. Sometimes the data can be stolen by hackers or sold to other companies without permission. If we lose the control of our personal information, this can be dangerous and also we feel uncomfortable. In addition, once a company has our data, it is very hard to delete it or to know who can see it.

In my opinion, privacy is very important, but some tracking is acceptable if the company is honest and ask for permission. I think the government should make strong rules to protect people's data. In conclusion, online tracking has both good and bad sides, and there must be a good balance between convenience and privacy.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 20 Test 3 model answer is 261 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

What makes this a Band 6 IELTS essay?

A Band 6 answer addresses the task with a clear position and adequate vocabulary, but development is uneven and it contains noticeable grammar errors that do not prevent understanding.

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