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Cambridge IELTS 20 Test 3 — Band 8 model essay

267 words · 13 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Many people accept online tracking in exchange for convenience. Others think privacy is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

许多人为了便利接受线上追踪;另一些人认为隐私更重要。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 8 model answer

Scarcely a moment passes online without our behaviour being recorded, and society remains divided over whether this is a fair bargain. Many willingly accept tracking for the convenience it delivers, while others contend that privacy is too precious to barter. Having considered both positions, I believe the convenience is genuine but has been allowed to eclipse privacy to an unhealthy degree.

The pragmatic case for tracking is not difficult to appreciate. When platforms understand our preferences, they can anticipate our needs, filter out irrelevance and spare us countless small frustrations. Personalised recommendations, predictive search and location-aware services all depend on data, and for a great many users the surrender of some information seems a modest price for tools that are sophisticated, responsive and, crucially, free at the point of use.

Yet the objections of privacy advocates are weighty and, I would argue, insufficiently heeded. The scale of modern data collection extends far beyond what most users imagine, encompassing their movements, purchases and even their moods. Such information is frequently traded between companies without informed consent or exposed in breaches, leaving individuals open to fraud, discrimination and subtle manipulation of their choices. Unlike a stolen possession, forfeited privacy can almost never be recovered.

My conclusion is that the two values can coexist, but only under firm regulation. Tracking is defensible where it is transparent, proportionate and genuinely consented to, yet the present arrangement tilts overwhelmingly towards commercial interests. Robust, well-enforced data-protection law is therefore essential, ensuring that the undeniable convenience of the digital economy is not purchased at the cost of a right people cannot afford to lose.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 20 Test 3 model answer is 267 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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